ePeerReview: Intergovernmental Platform on Biodiversity and Ecosystem Services

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Reset Your search: Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB | Round 1

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 1 Line(s): 6 Issue: Clarity of text	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

Change the end of the sentence By the International Steering Committee of the Consultative process towards an IMoSEB

Response: Done.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 2 Line(s): 14 Issue: Clarity of text	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

After Ecosystem, add and biodiversity

Response: Done.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 3 Line(s): 13 Issue: Clarity of text	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

A mention to the MDG and its objectives and the links between Biodiversity and development should be develop

Response: Done.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 4 Line(s): 4 Issue: Clarity of text	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

Remove such as in Brazil (such a process is not developed in Brazil, others countries as Mexico or Sweden are better examples, Brazil is not actually the best example of biodiversity management in the world)

Response: Done.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 4 Line(s): 10 Issue: Clarity of text	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

Add after MEAs : in particular the CBD and its SBSTTA

Response: The IPBES is for all biodiversity related conventions, emphasizing one may give the wrong signal.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 4 Line(s): 14 Issue: IPBES and other ongoing processes	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

Add after MEAs : taking account of the Biodiversity Liaison Group (We have to consider that IPBES should rely as much as possible on existing processes)

Response: Done.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 6 Line(s): 11 Issue: Clarity of text	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

Remove "in particular"

Response: Deleted the component.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 6 Line(s): 27 Issue: Clarity of text	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

Not only SGA could generate knowledge – It should be mentioned that others ways and means exists

Response: Broadened to include assessments in general, and not just SGAs.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 7 Line(s): 6 Issue: Clarity of text	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

Add after on ecosystems: , ecosystem services

Response: Done.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 7 Line(s): 22 Issue: IPBES and other ongoing processes	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

The ongoing project TEEB should be mentioned and the consideration to develop synergy with underline

Response: Links with ongoing processes which will include implicitly TEEB.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 7 Line(s): 23 Issue: Role of IPBES	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

Another objective could be to develop a tool to translate private or public decision maker’s concerns or requests in a scientific /appropriate form

Response: Work programme streamlined, based on review comments.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 8 Line(s): 2 Issue: Clarity of text	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

Add after payments : and arrangements

Response: Section reformulated.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 8 Line(s): 31 Issue: Clarity of text	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

Remove drawn on lessons learned from countries like Brazil (Cf. comments p. 4)

Response: All mention to specific countries removed.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 9 Line(s): 4 Issue: Role of IPBES	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

Another accomplishment could be the development and/or support of regional and/or thematics platform responding to regional specificities, needs and constraints.

Response: Work programme streamlined, based on review comments.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 9 Line(s): 18 Issue: Institutional arrangements	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

Peer review should be broaden to others fields than science, as private sector biodiversity specialist, biodiversity managers,...

Response: Science defined in IPBES is broad, it includes a multidisciplinary approach.

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1. Concept Note Page(s): 9 Line(s): 22 Issue: IPBES and other ongoing processes	Didier Babin Institutional (didier.babin@cirad.fr) Consultative Process towards an IMoSEB

IPBES should adjust and support GEO in its activities , IPBES can also contribute to IPCC on biodiversity and ecosystem services issues

Response: Sentence reformulated to emphasize "build on existing processes".